My sister's house is like all the
other examples of middle class, suburban home ownership going up and
down her street. There are, of course, variations on the outside
appearance but they all more or less have the general floor plan, a
trick long used by builders to streamline construction and hold down
costs. Being a real estate agent you learn these semi-secret facts
quickly and work hard to downplay them with possible buyers. None of that matters as I strolled up the short curved walkway leading to
the front door, instead my thoughts flash back to the day Jessica and Samuel,
her husband, moved in just two years before.
***
***
“Lily,” Jessica yelled at me as she exited the passenger side of the rented moving van, “Samuel is going to need some help getting the piano unloaded first. How long will we have to wait for your husband to finally show up so we can get started?” Samuel came around the other side of the truck at the same time not saying anything, but I could tell he was upset. I had no idea what they might be fighting about this time but I knew it had nothing to do with getting the piano off the truck.
Still, my sister's question was fair, but I
nonetheless cringed at the implied insult towards my own spouse. My
husband, Mark Harrison, is an industrial salesman whose salary comes
largely from commission. That means incredibly long hours and at
least two weeks a month spent on the road in an attempt to keep
clients happy. Throw in the fact that Mark's father owns the company
and often gives his son the worst accounts in an attempt to show the
rest of his employees he does not play favorites only makes my husband's
job more difficult.
Mark showed up about two hours later
looking drained still wearing the suit that he wore the day before to
give a sales presentation to a major company in the process of
building a new factory outside Charlotte, North Carolina. A six-hour
round trip drive from Columbia, made worse by stress and not enough
sleep. Despite his exhaustion, my husband puts in a full day's work of
helping move my sister and her husband into their new house.
***
***
Coming back to the here and now, I unlock the front door and step inside. I am greeted by silence and Jessica's collection of family pictures
hanging on the walls and nick-knacks placed neatly on several
bookcases. Jessica's decoration of her house looks like a chaotic
blend of formal portraits and impromptu snapshots combined with cheap
souvenirs from numerous theme parks. I find her style clumsy and a
little stomach churning, but then again, I wasn't the one living
here.
As I turn to walk down the hallway
towards the master bedroom, I am confronted by the picture of Jessica
and I sitting by a campfire. The picture was probably taken by Samuel
from some distance and it is obvious my sister and I are engaged in
some sort of deep conversation. As usual for most sisters, we liked
to think we told each other everything about our lives. I turn away
from the picture and continue to the master bedroom, I have a task to
complete for my sister before I return to my own life.
The trip was a combined family vacation
to the Smokey Mountains of North Carolina just a year after they
moved into this house. We all stayed in single rental cabin next a
beautiful mountain stream. Jessica and I, along with our kids had a
blast, except Mark who kept getting work-related calls on his cell
phone forcing us all to wait for him. Samuel took it upon himself to
take his two kids, Zane and Isabel, along with my son Lewis on hikes
on the trails going up into the mountains. This gave Jessica and myself a chance to relax and
reconnect in ways we hadn't been able to since we moved out of our
parent's house.
***
***
“I can tell Mark's job is really
wearing you down.” Jessica said to me taking our conversation into
an entirely new and unexpected direction while refilling my wine
glass. At first I said nothing in return instead focusing my fuzzy
concentration on holding my glass steady. We had already killed one
bottle before Samuel left with the kids and I had every intention of
helping finish the one we were drinking from then and the other still
chilling in the cooler.
“It's Mark's dad,” I say in
frustration after leaning back in my chair, “the bastard makes him
chase down every piece of shit lead and maintain the most difficult
clients. I've told Mark to quit and find another job but he wants to
take control of the business when his father retires.”
“That's not what I talking about,”
Jessica says smugly. “I can tell you two are drifting apart. He's
carried this type of workload for years, and not long ago you would
have checked on him several times and done something to make him
comfortable. Now, you just leave him alone, truthfully, it's almost
callous the way you ignore him now.” She said making a motion
towards one the cabin window's where Mark was visible sitting at a
laptop while talking on his cell phone.
My sister had hit on something way to
uncomfortable for me to think about with so much wine in my system.
The only thing I could do was play to Jessica's self adsorbed nature
and change the subject. “Enough about me and my marriage, what are
you and Samuel fighting about these days.” Always one to show off
her dirty laundry to me, that starts Jessica on a long rant about
Samuel's own job and its crappy pay. Before long, with the wine now
really loosening my sister's tongue even further, she confides in me
her growing suspicion that Samuel might be fooling around on her.
Samuel's job is inspecting houses still
under construction and those that are finished and being resold. It
is a tedious and lackluster job that involves him crawling around in
places best left to the imagination. To help out my sister, I started
letting Samuel do all the inspections on the houses I am selling. My
husband was also doing Samuel and even bigger favor by letting him,
unbeknownst to my sister, work part-time at the warehouse his dad's
company used. Jessica and Samuel always seem on the verge of being
overwhelmed by their bills and the money he earned at the warehouse
went straight to them.
The only problem was that this created
periods of time where Samuel was out of touch with his wife. As time went by though, Jessica began developing suspicions on what Samuel was
doing during these periods. Of course, Jessica's growing accusations
and Samuel's equally strong denials only made the situation worse
until they separated.
***
***
I enter the master bedroom where
Jessica and Samuel slept to collect another load of her belonging and
take them to our parent's house where she and the kids are staying.
Like a large majority of the bedrooms in this increasingly
homogenized suburban existence it is a near perfect copy of hundreds
of others I have seen. Especially the empty houses for sale where I now secretly meet Samuel when our schedules allow.
I am ashamed of the thrill that runs up
my spine when I think of our accidental encounter that started our
affair just a few months before. That day my schedule was insane,
with me running around showing numerous newly finished houses to
prospective buyers. I made one last stop to checkout a house being
resold and found Samuel climbing down from the attic. Our reaction at
unexpectedly seeing each other was almost bizarre in its hokeyness,
until we touched passing each other in the hallway.
I fully realize there is no future in
what Samuel and I are doing, it is a betrayal of the promises we made
to our spouses but loneliness and frustration is a powerful acid on
even the best relationships. Of course, the end result will be
disastrous for everyone connected to us, but as I empty the drawers
containing my sister's belonging I cannot stop myself from planning
my next encounter with her husband.
5 comments:
I have a feeling stuff like this is going on quite a bit in our sanitized homogenized suburban neighborhoods!
An interesting exploration of the relationship between the two sisters. It jumped about a bit and I wasn't always sure where I was in the story but the twist really hit me - didn't see it coming at all.
Thanks for sharing!
Pixel: Back in the 1970's in my hometown neighborhood, word got out about an incident where a guy threw his best friend out of his living room window. The adults talked about the event in hushed tones in front of us kids never revealing what exactly happened and like most things it was eventually forgotten. Some time during the 1990's I learned that the owner of the house and his wife were having the other guy and his wife over for dinner. Apparently everything was fine until the guests tried to recruit the other couple into their swingers club.
Back in the 1970's you simply didn't talk about such things in respectable company in my hometown. Long story short, when I learned this information it explained why several families either became hermits or moved away all together.
Rose: Absolutely, my jumping around in time was far too quirky. One of the reasons I gave up flash fiction for a long time was my inability to smooth over rough parts in a story. I just lost the proper feel for how a story should flow. Another reason was simply a good number of my stories simply fell flat that a soda left uncapped.
I really enjoyed this one. You did a great job exploring the dirty little secrets hidden behind closed doors in the cute little coves with tidy sidewalks and well manicured lawns. It seemed at the start that the one sister knew something was going on, but spared her sister the details. I certainly didn't expect the twist at the end. I, too, grew up with sending the kids to the other room while the grown-ups talk mentality. We, of course, listened in as best we could though, and our little neighborhood was actually a soap opera and a half at times.
Most of the intrigue was generally centered around members of the same family. Your story clearly reveals the hypocrisy that can occur between two people that are supposed to have each other's back.
Joyce: Thanks! Like I mentioned my fiction ideas have been flatter than the Kansas prairie for a long time. I loved this prompt though, so much I might return to the story and expand it some at a later date.
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