The phone started ringing a few minutes
after two o'clock in the morning. Jack Harper immediately woke up but
just stared at the landline phone silently cursing the old girlfriend
whose suggestion it had been to add a 24/7 emergency contact number
on both his website and yellow page listing. She had been a blond
television reporter working at one of the local Denver stations.
Despite being an excellent television journalist most of her
colleagues at the station thought her ability to draw viewers came
from her piercing green eyes and superbly athletic body. This
conspiracy of small-minded and jealous people lead to her being
assigned light, human interest stories that did nothing for her
career. Jack never admitted to anyone, including himself, but their
relationship for him had long moved beyond her obvious physical
qualities and talents between the sheets.
It still hurt that they had parted ways
after she received a lucrative job offer at a television station
down in sunny Miami. She left Jack and cold and snowy Denver behind
so fast it caused the windchill factor to drop an extra ten degrees
that winter morning.
For the two years after she had driven
off to pursue her career while enjoying colorful drinks and tropical
breezes the only phone calls Jack got were from cranks trying to be
funny and more than a few drunks who for some reason thought the
number was for a taxi service. Several times Jack thought about
having the line removed but only while busy doing other things, and
of course during those idle moments the task completely escaped his
mind.
After ten rings the answering machine
picked up and played the message Jack had recorded telling the caller
to leave their name and number and that he would get back to them
shortly. Jack continued to look at the compact device sitting on his
nightstand with a combination of indifference and slight irritation
waiting for the caller to say something. Even though the line
remained open allowing him to hear background noises that suggested a
major highway was nearby the caller said nothing. Just before Jack
was about to hit the button that would sever the connection the
caller spoke.
“Hello...Mr. Harper you don't know me
but my name is Carol Briggs and I found your number in the phone book
and I desperately need your help.” After years of being a private
investigator Jack could tell this Carol was scared and probably
alone. After making the first statement she fell silent again
creating an eerie state of tension with Jack unconsciously moving
closer to the phone. Something inside Jack's mind loudly whispered
to him that this woman was indeed in great danger.
“My family,” she began again, “went
missing eight days ago and now I know someone is after me. For
reasons I can't explain over the phone I don't trust the police so I
ran but I need help. Please pick up, I know my life is in danger.”
Without really thinking about it Jack
snatched the remote phone off the main answering machine portion of
the device. “Yeah, this is Jack Harper. Where are you now?” He
asked while creating a mental checklist of things to bring to meet
this woman.
“Thank God,” Carol Briggs said
breathlessly. “I'm at an abandoned gas station off Interstate 25
near Heritage Hills.” She then went on to tell Jack the number of
the exit she took to leave the interstate.
“Please tell me you're talking from a
pay phone.” Jack said accepting the woman's statement that she was
being followed and that her life was in danger.
“Yes, and I've parked my car behind
the station.”
“Great, I'm on the way but it will
take me close to an hour to get to your location. Now this is going
to sound crazy and I know it's cold but I want you to find another
place to hide nearby. I'll be driving a blue Mustang and I'll blink
my lights after I pull into the parking area. Don't expose yourself
until I get out of the car.”
***
To Carol, the truck stop diner Jack
brought her to was like something from the family vacations she and
her siblings suffered through as children. Instead of her family going to such
places like Disney World or other huge theme parks her father and
mother took their three children on long road trips exploring every
cheesy roadside attraction and state park they encountered. Likewise,
they would invariably stop at seedy little diners to eat while mom
and dad sat together plotting some new course towards another bizarre
but boring destination. Carol could still feel the childhood
resentment at being hauled around hundreds of back roads, but now as
an adult she actually missed those times.
Several minutes passed before the waitress showed up to serve some much needed coffee and to take their order. For whatever reason the waitress seemed intent in engaging Carol in small talk despite the fact it should have been clear to a blind person that she clearly didn't want to be bothered with idle conversation. This allowed Jack a moment to ponder the differences between the two women.
The waitress looked like a true long-time food service warrior. Jack figured she was in her mid-forties and given the ease she poured his coffee without spilling a drop while listening to Carol give her food order she had probably worked here for at least a decade. A wide but lackluster smile totally devoid of feeling along with tired and haunted eyes all but confirmed her life had been a long, weary struggle.
The waitress looked like a true long-time food service warrior. Jack figured she was in her mid-forties and given the ease she poured his coffee without spilling a drop while listening to Carol give her food order she had probably worked here for at least a decade. A wide but lackluster smile totally devoid of feeling along with tired and haunted eyes all but confirmed her life had been a long, weary struggle.
On the other hand, Carol Briggs basic appearance, if you
discounted the recent turn of events, screamed mindless but
ultimately an unremarkable and mundane suburban life. She was in her mid to
late thirties and had the soft hands and nails of someone who used
various household rubber gloves for working in a flower garden to
washing dishes. While the waitress had the look of someone used to
long struggles Carol's eyes couldn't contain the look of utter and
unbelievable shock at the recent events that had befallen her.
Carol's clothes also spoke volumes about her lifestyle. They could
have come from any number of slightly upper end department stores
nominally catering to white suburban dwellers who wanted to look
unique but yet not exceed neighborhood standards of decorum. When you
added everything up Carol was one of those decent, pleasant but not
highly educated individuals whose exposure to strange and tragic
events came strictly from a television drama.
“Now, tell me why I left my warm bed
in the middle of the night and raced down a good portion of Colorado
and why you drove all the way from Colorado Springs to call me”
Jack said smiling as he grabbed the mug of coffee the waitress had
just filled.
Carol took a sip of her own coffee
savoring its almost Herculean strength letting its warmth invade her
body. “Like I said in the car, I was scared. Eight days ago I leave
the hospital where I work and return home to find my family missing.”
“You said the house was in perfect
order?” Jack asked purposely interrupting her train of thought.
“Yes, at first I just thought that
Michael, my husband, must have cleaned up but it was early evening
and he and my son would have, should have actually, been long home.
When I couldn't reach Michael on his cell, I phoned his work to see
if he was on a service call and decided to take our son, Paul, with
him. He's a copier technician and occasionally has to go repair some
client's equipment after normal business hours. They're usually
pretty routine, so once and awhile he'll take Paul for a little
father and son outing.”
“And your husband's employer told you
he wasn't on a service call.” Jack said repeating the rushed story
she had told him as they sped south on Interstate 25.
“Yes, so I called several friends and
neighbors searching for them. No one had seen them since Michael left
to take Paul to school that morning. By this time I was getting
scared, so I called the police but they immediately told me there was
nothing they could do until the next day.”
“Now tell me again what made you
think you were in danger and that the police couldn't be trusted?”
“The next morning two police
detectives show up at my door asking questions about my husband. They
were in plain clothes but presented badges and official looking
identification so I let them in figuring someone decided to look into
his and my son's disappearance early. They asked simple questions
about whether my husband might have been having an affair, suffered
from mental health issues, or had an enemy who might want to hurt him
or our son. A few of the questions irritated me but none of them
seemed out of bounds. Things became weird when the one who called
himself Barnes received a phone call on his cell. The call was brief
but something was said that caused Barnes to tell his partner,
Wilson, they had to leave immediately. They didn't ask for my husband
or son's picture nor did they leave me a business card, say when they
would return, or even give me a phone number so I could call them. As
I am opening the front door to let them out Wilson asks his partner
if they should go ahead and take me.”
“Take you?” Jack repeats looking at
Carol. “Could they have meant to the police station?”
Carol takes a deep breath staring down
into her coffee. “I don't think so,” she says, “there was a
strange look on this Wilson's face that scared me. More to the point,
Barnes was beginning to nod his head yes and was reaching for
something under his sports coat when several of my neighbors walk up
on my front steps. They were there to see if I needed anything and
probably to learn something about Michael and Paul. This Barnes and
Wilson then run out the house covering their face with their hands
and get in their car and drive away.”
As he listened to her story, Jack
begins to feel the hairs on the back of his neck standing up. “You
told me in the car that you then called the cops and reported the
incident with them telling you that they hadn't sent anyone to your
house?”
“Yes, they said since twenty-four
hours hadn't really passed yet they weren't going to send anyone till
that evening. By this time I am beyond terrified, so I ask a few of
my neighbors to stay with me. After that, three further events begin
to suggest that I have fallen into a surreal nightmare. The first
being the arrival of Mrs. Carter to my house, she's an old widow
woman who lives at the end of my street. The neighborhood grapevine
being what it is, she had heard what was going on and came down to
tell me she saw Michael talking with a man the day before in the
parking lot of the shopping mall close to our house. She then told me
this unknown man showed Michael something that flashed and seemed to
stun him for a moment. Michael apparently quickly recovered because
about a minute of so later Mrs. Carter said my husband and son were
willingly leaving with the man in his car. Just seconds after that
she sees Michael's car leaving the parking lot but not the person
driving it. Mrs. Carter admitted the encounter looked strange but it
all happened so fast and no one seemed in distress she didn't think
anything of it until she heard neither had returned home.”
“Tell me about the second thing that
pushed you over the edge to call me.” Jack said finding himself
actually perplexed.
“When the police finally arrive at my
house to gather information on Michael and Paul they show up in
force. I am interviewed for several hours and asked hundreds of
questions with a team combing through my house as if they were
searching for drugs. During all this one of the police technicians
hooked the digital answering machine up to a laptop and started
retrieving deleted messages. One of them was a person who didn't give
a name but wanted to meet Michael and me in the shopping mall
parking lot the next morning and that we had to bring Paul. Just as
soon as the person stopped talking a high pitched noise started
blaring from the answering machine speaker that sounded like cats
being tortured. It was so bad it gave everyone nearby a headache.”
“And you said this message was
addressed to Michael and you?”
“Yes, but there was staffing issues
at the hospital and I had to go in early. The answering machine time
stamp had the message being recorded thirty minutes after I left the
house.”
Jack didn't know what to make of the
answering machine but the third item Carol mentioned in the car was
the one that worried him. “Tell me about the man who showed up at
the hospital.”
“I had walked down to the cafeteria
to grab some breakfast when my cell phone rings. It one of my friends
on the floor I was working, she said a strange man had just left the
nurse's station asking for me. She described him as this amazingly
good looking but a hulking and intimidating figure. When asked his name
I was told he said Joaquin Weiss. I go back up to meet him and while
he is pleasant and friendly claiming to be a long lost friend of my
husband's he gave me the creeps. There were a lot of people on
the floor then and I could tell it bothered him. He soon left and I
largely forgot about the event, a nurse is always busy at work, but I
saw him again a couple of days after Michael and Paul disappeared. I
was at the grocery store and I caught him staring at me. I dropped
everything and ran to my car. When I pulled out into the street I had
to stop momentarily because of traffic, it was then I glanced over
and saw this figure come running out of one of the grocery store side
doors. This person was sprinting towards my car inhumanly fast.”
Carol stops for a moment as the memory
of events begin to overwhelm her. “ I didn't know what to do, the
police didn't seem trustworthy and this strange man seemed like
something from a bad spy movie. So I drove until I believed myself
far enough away to be safe for a couple of minutes. It was then I
looked for a pay phone. I began searching through the phone book when
I stumbled across your listing. Something compelled me to call even
though the advertisement seemed cheesy.”
Jack is quiet for several second, so
much Carol begins to think she might have offended the man.
“Describe this Joaquin Weiss to me,”
Jack said suddenly and looking agitated.
“He looked a little younger than me and
was at least six-foot, four
inches, with a muscular body, the type an Olympic athlete might have
after years of training. He wore his brown hair like someone in the
military, short but with style. The face was chiseled and intense,
like an evil Brad Pitt.”
Jack just stared out towards the diner
entrance for a moment and began slowly reaching for his pistol
concealed underneath his jacket. “That man just entered the
building,” he said to Carol, “get ready to run.”
End of Part One.
(Author's note: Been playing with this for several weeks after going on a Netflix sponsored X-File binge. As things slowly progressed it took on tones from the Twilight Zone with a just a hint of Star Trek Fan fiction. I bet no one will get that reference though.)
6 comments:
You got me and I want more!! So suspenseful!!
Yes, me too! When will Part 2 be ready?
This story is certainly the stuff of nightmares, but the sentence She left Jack and cold and snowy Denver behind so fast it caused the windchill factor to drop an extra ten degrees that winter morning. made me laugh out loud.
Nice storytelling, you drew me in quickly to where I am curious as to where this is going...
Rose: Thanks, I'll try to keep up the story's pace.
Pixel: I actually started to write this in the first person in the style of Spillane. When I restarted though I kept that line because I also thought it was funny.
Sage: I have a general idea where I going. Got a number of likes on Google+ for this story but no one has guessed the Star Trek reference.
Got a page and a half of Part Two done, the rest should be ready by Wednesday.
Ooh this story is right up my alley - even though I didn't get the Star Wars reference... :)
JOAQUIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNN!!
;)
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