tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post2283803974322227489..comments2024-02-01T20:22:59.199-05:00Comments on Random Brain Droppings: Dispatches from the Twilight War Commander Zaiushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-7470354551677391542015-08-10T08:26:44.545-04:002015-08-10T08:26:44.545-04:00JOAQUIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNN!!
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JOAQUIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNN!!<br /><br />;)<br />MikePhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11425927693504630691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-56385999265876826942015-08-09T19:48:20.809-04:002015-08-09T19:48:20.809-04:00Ooh this story is right up my alley - even though ...Ooh this story is right up my alley - even though I didn't get the Star Wars reference... :)The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-87346933852140876672015-08-09T11:42:04.384-04:002015-08-09T11:42:04.384-04:00Rose: Thanks, I'll try to keep up the story...Rose: Thanks, I'll try to keep up the story's pace.<br /><br />Pixel: I actually started to write this in the first person in the style of Spillane. When I restarted though I kept that line because I also thought it was funny.<br /><br />Sage: I have a general idea where I going. Got a number of likes on Google+ for this story but no one has guessed the Star Trek reference.<br /><br />Got a page and a half of Part Two done, the rest should be ready by Wednesday. <br /><br />Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-6108614694480168892015-08-09T05:48:58.532-04:002015-08-09T05:48:58.532-04:00Nice storytelling, you drew me in quickly to where...Nice storytelling, you drew me in quickly to where I am curious as to where this is going...sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-73769290573984424102015-08-08T21:30:46.059-04:002015-08-08T21:30:46.059-04:00Yes, me too! When will Part 2 be ready?
This stor...Yes, me too! When will Part 2 be ready?<br /><br />This story is certainly the stuff of nightmares, but the sentence <i>She left Jack and cold and snowy Denver behind so fast it caused the windchill factor to drop an extra ten degrees that winter morning.</i> made me laugh out loud.Pixel Peeperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553862902461169270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-36516173602602108422015-08-08T14:53:50.373-04:002015-08-08T14:53:50.373-04:00You got me and I want more!! So suspenseful!!You got me and I want more!! So suspenseful!!Rose Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07180873324576064516noreply@blogger.com