tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post975256472878523862..comments2024-02-01T20:22:59.199-05:00Comments on Random Brain Droppings: Baja SunriseCommander Zaiushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-8909137731418336212010-05-20T05:21:30.024-04:002010-05-20T05:21:30.024-04:00Madmike: You know I actually believe this could ha...Madmike: You know I actually believe this could have been book length. I edited out a bunch of descriptive stuff as well as the incident between the obnoxious middle-aged tourist that hassled Maria causing Dan to toss him out the bar and into the water.<br /><br />At one time, I was foolish enough to believe I could have kept this baby under 3000 words.<br /><br />I do have one problem now, I'm out of story ideas for the most part.<br /><br />Will: Hell Yeah!!! Truth be told I am just as partial to Indian and Arab ladies. Hell for the new Miss USA I'd almost convert.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-11292667350105713922010-05-19T17:39:33.084-04:002010-05-19T17:39:33.084-04:00Two words, double b; Michelle Rodriguez......P.S. ...Two words, double b; Michelle Rodriguez......P.S. I wouldn't mind getting "Lost" with her.Will "take no prisoners" Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02315659209094683602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-58248088001198672792010-05-19T17:08:17.908-04:002010-05-19T17:08:17.908-04:00Another triumph my friend. You have come a long wa...Another triumph my friend. You have come a long way. I read this in three shifts and loved every word.Kentucky Rainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16753739401363847764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-31058821514872569652010-05-19T08:28:27.301-04:002010-05-19T08:28:27.301-04:00Will: No problem at all, Hispanic women have alway...Will: No problem at all, Hispanic women have always fascinated me with their fiery personalities and sensual looks. That might be a stereotype but dammit the Hispanic ladies I have known were like that.<br /><br />Naj: Thanks, still working on it, maybe someday.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-16140124155938218852010-05-19T04:33:53.752-04:002010-05-19T04:33:53.752-04:00Beach; have you per chance published any booksÉ
I...Beach; have you per chance published any booksÉ<br /><br />I`d love to pre-purchase if you will :)Najhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17728668942925956610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-29878447175085365432010-05-18T22:08:10.424-04:002010-05-18T22:08:10.424-04:00With all of the beautiful Hispanic actresses today...With all of the beautiful Hispanic actresses today, it's easy to forget about the rampant discrimination (type-casting being the least of it) that this population faced in Hollywood (not to mention in society as a whole). Dolores Del Rio was in this sense, double b, kind of a Jackie Robinson/Sidney Poitier figure. I can only imagine how big of a star she'd be today......P.S. Sorry for the tangent.Will "take no prisoners" Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02315659209094683602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-43486074791268142612010-05-18T19:40:02.169-04:002010-05-18T19:40:02.169-04:00Randal: Actually the good governor was recently do...Randal: Actually the good governor was recently down in Key West with his Argentine lady friend.<br /><br />Tomcat: Thank you, I just wish I was my main character in way.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-71587665666330166392010-05-18T15:25:38.841-04:002010-05-18T15:25:38.841-04:00As ususl, Beach, an incredible tale.As ususl, Beach, an incredible tale.TomCathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11397335545286040472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-28086428130144925602010-05-18T13:08:40.583-04:002010-05-18T13:08:40.583-04:00Another winner, sir, but you can't fool us, I ...Another winner, sir, but you can't fool us, I know you based this on Sanford and his Argentinian lady.Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-17611727445561482892010-05-18T02:39:31.889-04:002010-05-18T02:39:31.889-04:00Gwen: When I had far more detail in the story I al...Gwen: When I had far more detail in the story I almost cut it up into chapters. The relationship between Daniel and Maria was explained far better with Maria showing her anger at Dan. Also, some of the other expats were given names and had parts in the story.<br /><br />Will: I actually had it far more detailed with Dan killing the guy in a dramatic battle but that was two pages all by itself. It was simply too long for a story that was already longer than I wanted.<br /><br />I googled Dolores and yes, she was smoking.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-51602864910382451582010-05-18T00:17:11.915-04:002010-05-18T00:17:11.915-04:00Though she came a little earlier than the other 2,...Though she came a little earlier than the other 2, I've decided - Dolores Del Rio as Maria. Google her, dude. She was HOT!!!!!Will "take no prisoners" Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02315659209094683602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-63513735025013960662010-05-18T00:06:05.282-04:002010-05-18T00:06:05.282-04:00Very Tarantino-like. I especially like the succinc...Very Tarantino-like. I especially like the succinct and dead-pan description of the way that that douche-bag killed himself. Of course, being that I'm also a fan of classic cinema, I was thinking more along the lines of Deborah Kerr and Robert Mitchum in the starring roles.Will "take no prisoners" Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02315659209094683602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-81240245962045202922010-05-17T08:46:36.252-04:002010-05-17T08:46:36.252-04:00More good stuff I've been taking in at clips.....More good stuff I've been taking in at clips... treats. Thx again BB.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16419040049480437384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-14649239626956385952010-05-17T05:27:39.762-04:002010-05-17T05:27:39.762-04:00Marja: Yeah, its a little long but you should have...Marja: Yeah, its a little long but you should have seen it before I cut it down. Glad you liked it.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-39207126482292862132010-05-16T21:56:49.789-04:002010-05-16T21:56:49.789-04:00had to come back today to read the rest of your in...had to come back today to read the rest of your intriguing story as I got interrupted yesterday. A little romance with an x wife in a blood curdling story. You got me hooked. I liked the sensible end as well. CoolMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-28231499889749756112010-05-16T00:31:45.342-04:002010-05-16T00:31:45.342-04:00Pixel Peeper: The song I pulled the story from is ...Pixel Peeper: The song I pulled the story from is one of my favorites, the song was recorded in 1984 and to this day will stop me in my tracks.<br /><br />Selma and Scarlet are definite winners in my book.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-57795394669635693962010-05-15T21:06:28.935-04:002010-05-15T21:06:28.935-04:00Your story really pulled me in - so much, indeed, ...Your story really pulled me in - so much, indeed, that I decided in the movie, Abby would be played by Scarlet Johanson and Selma Hayek would get the role of Maria.<br /><br />Still thinking about Daniel...Pixel Peeperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553862902461169270noreply@blogger.com