tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post3543093917699063479..comments2024-02-01T20:22:59.199-05:00Comments on Random Brain Droppings: F3 Cycle 83 "A Small Price for Paradise"Commander Zaiushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-7016136626532256642012-06-25T23:46:49.141-04:002012-06-25T23:46:49.141-04:00This is grand. Terrific build-up to quite the ten...This is grand. Terrific build-up to quite the tense situation. Little by little, bit by bit, a picture begins to take form, but how will it be completed? It's already driving me up the wall trying to figure out whether he should tell, initiate some covert investigation--both dangerous paths to follow. Please provide us with another installment. SOON!Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-66901501424107023032012-06-22T16:04:42.097-04:002012-06-22T16:04:42.097-04:00Nicely written. Eases you into the story, then add...Nicely written. Eases you into the story, then adds the intrigue and suspense slowly. Would like more set here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-74881761827969395452012-06-21T20:45:05.363-04:002012-06-21T20:45:05.363-04:00What's not to say that after Thomas Banks dies...What's not to say that after Thomas Banks dies a cruel and painful death, the true faces of Scott Norris and his lover come to the surface, along with their plans to build an even bigger mega resort.<br /><br />Then Roger Harper would have to do away with both of them...<br /><br />You better write that next episode.Pixel Peeperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553862902461169270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-73425088499215664432012-06-21T17:58:48.601-04:002012-06-21T17:58:48.601-04:00You had me right there on Camilla. Great voice!You had me right there on Camilla. Great voice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-52412254484579214752012-06-21T14:27:05.647-04:002012-06-21T14:27:05.647-04:00Hey, I just threw out a book on organic chemistry ...Hey, I just threw out a book on organic chemistry -- what a coincidence . . . <br />Nicely written.goatmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02317617928368945316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-27271338557061559412012-06-21T09:47:14.314-04:002012-06-21T09:47:14.314-04:00Good one!Good one!Teresahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06102860174001915131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-43395417510784253102012-06-21T09:03:54.689-04:002012-06-21T09:03:54.689-04:00To me it read more like John D MacDonald. I expect...To me it read more like John D MacDonald. I expect Travis McGee to show up in the chapter. Good writing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00533184345345882921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-32800722607466172632012-06-21T08:50:19.521-04:002012-06-21T08:50:19.521-04:00Please do write that episode!Please do write that episode!Thomas Pluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17008022962076648740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-45116956598128914132012-06-21T06:25:32.702-04:002012-06-21T06:25:32.702-04:00Akelamalu: Thanks! There could be another segment,...Akelamalu: Thanks! There could be another segment, was trying to get that suspense thing going so I sort of through everything into the air.<br /><br />Randal: Yeah, golf is an abomination to commonsense and Mother Nature. I can't wait to hear about one of those Florida pythons eating some middle-aged white golfer.<br /><br />Windsmoke: In a way I was going for one of those old Mickey Spillane thrillers.<br /><br />Life As We Know It: I do tend to rap all the faults of modern Western Civilization into small packages with one unlucky character holding all the blame. Poor Thomas Banks, if I do write another episode he will die a cruel and painful death.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-20443929731135604122012-06-20T21:58:42.778-04:002012-06-20T21:58:42.778-04:00Where ever there are people, especially white west...Where ever there are people, especially white western people, there goes paradise down the drain.Life As I Know It Nowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733963455243806298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-6990828223094500412012-06-20T18:14:08.359-04:002012-06-20T18:14:08.359-04:00Typical, chuck a beautiful woman with murder on h...Typical, chuck a beautiful woman with murder on her mind into the mix and everything in paradise turns upside down, maybe for the better or for the worse :-).Windsmoke.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12225394580987872677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-62977927329288580982012-06-20T10:37:09.873-04:002012-06-20T10:37:09.873-04:00You are providing aid and comfort to the enemy, yo...You are providing aid and comfort to the enemy, you terrorist, you! Wait, golf you said? Carry on, poison pen.Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-4147045590975893372012-06-20T09:24:12.646-04:002012-06-20T09:24:12.646-04:00Intriguing. Is there going to be another instalme...Intriguing. Is there going to be another instalment to this Beach? I hope so!Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.com