tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post1783030280376023793..comments2024-02-01T20:22:59.199-05:00Comments on Random Brain Droppings: When the center cannot holdCommander Zaiushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-12430694110913714582010-03-02T16:11:05.780-05:002010-03-02T16:11:05.780-05:00Thanks!Thanks!TomCathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11397335545286040472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-4560277590372610122010-03-01T08:49:29.730-05:002010-03-01T08:49:29.730-05:00Sunshine: Its Monday now and I would still gladly ...Sunshine: Its Monday now and I would still gladly take it.<br /><br />Oso: Just bring the beers, I have about had it with the suburbs.<br /><br />Tomcat: Updated you this morning.<br /><br />Teeluck: Sorry, would jump in a skinny minute.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-49643784553010720322010-02-28T22:43:19.548-05:002010-02-28T22:43:19.548-05:00I came late...sorry couldn't get a cab...too m...I came late...sorry couldn't get a cab...too much snow in NY...what's happening here?...Beach, is Sunshine trying to get you to migrate to Canada? Don't do it Sunshine, he's the best writer we've got... Don't go Beach...noooo...<br /><br />Sorry did not take my meds today...Teeluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07436834652576541130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-23554054798591172022010-02-28T16:40:38.105-05:002010-02-28T16:40:38.105-05:00Nor do I, Beach. I just try to inform.
I'm r...Nor do I, Beach. I just try to inform.<br /><br />I'm rushing through to let you know that I've moved Politics Plus to http://www.politicsplus.org/blog<br /><br />You're in the new blogroll there. Would you please update me in yours?TomCathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11397335545286040472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-33562300479192760102010-02-27T20:48:16.705-05:002010-02-27T20:48:16.705-05:00Beach,
Thoght I'd try and cheer you up but let...Beach,<br />Thoght I'd try and cheer you up but let's face it I'm nowhere in Sunshine's league.<br /><br />So I'll leave you to enjoy her hug and just say "Hang in there Bro".Osohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09513535195785731541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-33191576095231934882010-02-27T16:23:44.226-05:002010-02-27T16:23:44.226-05:00A bummer day??!!
Well then, I'll just have to ...A bummer day??!!<br />Well then, I'll just have to give you one of my special ((Hugs)) with a titty press. <br />That always seems to make the boys feel better for some reason...<br /><br />:PLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09226811839348899360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-7665760441831597132010-02-27T14:15:29.151-05:002010-02-27T14:15:29.151-05:00Sunshine: Having a bummer of a day, Canada is look...Sunshine: Having a bummer of a day, Canada is looking damn good right now. Finding myself with less and less in common with many of my fellow Americans.<br /><br />Yeah I will write some more stories connected to the first two, but this story seriously brought me down. I will have to write something at least a little upbeat next.<br /><br />Oso: Thank you my friend, the first story in this series was on a whim playing with a few ideas that I picked up from several places. This one is mainly because of a conversation I had with a coworker that made my skin crawl a couple of feet.<br /><br />Randal: You caught me trashing the corporate overlords, good. If I happen to die suddenly you know what it means.<br /><br />Tomcat: Tom we are in a serious world of shit and I don't see it improving. Where we all end up I have no idea.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-63948739720292240572010-02-27T14:03:45.513-05:002010-02-27T14:03:45.513-05:00Beach, I did not have time today to read a long ar...Beach, I did not have time today to read a long article. You gave me a problem. Once I started, I could not stop.<br /><br />This week, the largest voting machine company in the nation bought out umber two.TomCathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11397335545286040472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-79246139688764147302010-02-27T11:57:49.298-05:002010-02-27T11:57:49.298-05:00I for one will not stand silent and watch you tras...I for one will not stand silent and watch you trash the hard-earned reputation of our corporate overlords with this hippie assault on all good sense. <br /><br />That said, fantastic stuff.Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-70090294623754749482010-02-26T21:45:42.863-05:002010-02-26T21:45:42.863-05:00Beach,
you know how to develop characters and eve...Beach,<br /><br />you know how to develop characters and even better you sustain interest.So I read because it's good, not because you're a friend. <br /><br />I mean that as a very strong compliment man.Osohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09513535195785731541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-39528997435327587712010-02-26T12:21:12.352-05:002010-02-26T12:21:12.352-05:00Okay. I made it through. (you know me and my atten...Okay. I made it through. (you know me and my attention span!)<br /><br />It was REALLY well written and a great story. Let's hope that it never comes to pass. <br />I keep telling you to move to Canada! Maybe you'd better! :P<br /><br />Are you going to do more on this character and story line? It's really good. :)<br /><br />((hugs))<br />LauraLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09226811839348899360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-77311938632461305922010-02-25T20:34:08.192-05:002010-02-25T20:34:08.192-05:00Sunshine: No worries, take your time. Will have to...Sunshine: No worries, take your time. Will have to write something upbeat next time, this story has actually brought me down.<br /><br />Madmike: I have been meaning to get that book! Don't know where I will turn next in this series.<br /><br />Caffeine Bubbles: <i>Attwood's "Handmaid's Tale"</i><br /><br />Believe it or not I read that book and saw the movie. <br /><br />I picked on the incredibly irritating Liz Cheney as the person who stole the election, her father was of course Satan.<br /><br />The writing course is a bunch of exercises and assignments with interaction over a discussion board, veru fun and helpful.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-10676534812967725612010-02-25T20:12:27.732-05:002010-02-25T20:12:27.732-05:00Wow.
The ending was unexpected.
Very intriguing....Wow.<br /><br />The ending was unexpected.<br /><br />Very intriguing. If it had been pages, I would've been turning them like crazy.<br /><br />Reminded me of similar episodes in History. (As well as some passages from Attwood's "Handmaid's Tale")<br /><br />Looking forward to reading the next chapter (and the story you mention at the beginning).<br /><br />I wonder who the president's father/mother was...<br /><br />What do they teach you in your writing course and how ?Caffeine Bubbleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15147804952510275706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-70993893599769801552010-02-25T13:31:25.223-05:002010-02-25T13:31:25.223-05:00I just finished Under the Dome by Stephen King Bea...I just finished Under the Dome by Stephen King Beach and you are starting to write with a familiar flair my friend. Good read and will look forward to the next "chapter."Kentucky Rainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16753739401363847764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-21381127618382230482010-02-25T12:47:17.638-05:002010-02-25T12:47:17.638-05:00I made it halfway through the story.
I'll have...I made it halfway through the story.<br />I'll have to come back and finish the rest later.<br />My brain is fried from zero sleep and driving for 2 hours in a snow/ice storm.<br /><br />I'm so sorry. I'll be back later to finish and comment. :)<br /><br />(Hugs)<br />LauraLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09226811839348899360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-18958935449058392682010-02-25T09:25:21.851-05:002010-02-25T09:25:21.851-05:00David: My grammar nemesis "passive voice"...David: My grammar nemesis "passive voice" gave me Hell on this story.<br /><br />MRMacrum: The usual demands on my time required that I cut some corners but I fairly happy with it. <br /><br />Holte: It was not my intention to write a prophetic story but I must admit that some of my fellow country men and women are as completely alien to me as humanly possible. I recently had a particularly disturbing conversation with one person who while declaring himself to be a middle of the road moderate quickly started frothing at the mouth like a rabid dog spouting insane ideas.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-31895353111093314172010-02-25T08:45:34.175-05:002010-02-25T08:45:34.175-05:00Excellent, but scary. It is the road we're on....Excellent, but scary. It is the road we're on.Holte Enderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10356437917387847542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-6207339637316402722010-02-25T07:17:59.142-05:002010-02-25T07:17:59.142-05:00Very realistic Beach. As David said some wonderfu...Very realistic Beach. As David said some wonderful imagery there. I especially like the political reorganizing you did.MRMacrumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-829836469690492751.post-56520814802444064432010-02-25T04:24:15.847-05:002010-02-25T04:24:15.847-05:00Wow, Beach. Your writing course is really paying ...Wow, Beach. Your writing course is really paying off. Great imagery and very atmospheric. It could be so true a story as well. Well done mate.<br /><br />Regards, David.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.com